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vinny0922
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 Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 4:23 am Post subject: Sherpa |
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| Stark,The mountain Rises up before Me . The Abode of Shiva .These montains are the Home of Demons.Every white man that has stood on top and felt like Conqueror only did so by their Grace.The colorful prayer flags ,and the smell of stew,snap me back to reality.It's cold,I wish to go Inside. |
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I R Speshul
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 11:48 am Post subject: |
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You know, I was wondering why you post your poems with commas in lieu of line breaks. Is that on purpose?
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 11:51 am Post subject: |
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yeah... I wonder why as well.
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Lady Eldorath
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 3:30 pm Post subject: |
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That's what I was getting at earlier when I was speaking about the format.
In terms of the context of this one, I'm curious as to why alude or link Shiva to demons?
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vinny0922
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:17 pm Post subject: poems |
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i told you guys i wasn't that good on the computer.every time i get the poem spaced out how i want it ,when it posts it goes right back to sentence after sentence.the reason i like doing it the old fashioned way, pencil to paper ,but then you guys wouldn't get to see them .that might not be so bad either , though.  |
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vinny0922
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 7:22 pm Post subject: Demons |
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| i read somewhere, can't remember where ,that the native Nepalese were afraid to go around Everest for this reason. but i guess that is understandable considering how dangerous Everest is. |
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vinny0922
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 10:43 pm Post subject: even the Dark gods don't want this one |
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| the time has come to offer my computer up as a bloody sacrifice to the Dark Gods! well maybe not a Bloody sacrifice, but i've aleays heard it's the thought that counts. |
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Lady Eldorath
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| Posted: Fri May 09, 2008 11:09 pm Post subject: Re: Demons |
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| vinny0922 wrote: | | i read somewhere, can't remember where ,that the native Nepalese were afraid to go around Everest for this reason. but i guess that is understandable considering how dangerous Everest is. |
I'd be interested in reading that story if you can find it. I've not heard it yet, but it's hard to know all the stories out there. I know that there is a great deal of respect for Shiva, but I've not heard of Shiva being attributed with being a demon though.
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